Night Mistress

Hey Ash, This chapter is kida of wierd. So the elder knew what Issac was? That's wierd. Are the vampires going to enter an alliance with the Soren and What's ...

Hey Ash, I am so sorry that it took me forever to review this chapter. I Have been so busy. Anyways, this flows very nicely. So we find out what ...

Hey ash, This chapter was cool. We got to learn about the gifted vampires. now on the romance part, I tortally feel a love triangle between Iaasc, Sophia and Michael ...

Hey Ash. I didn't even know the kid was blind until the line that mention the cane. It just shows what a good writer. I have read Evermore, and it's ...

Hey Ash. Sorry again it has taken me so long to read your story. That last line has me on the edge of my seat! What's a soren? Are they ...

Hey Ash, Sorry it took me so long to read this chapter. I have been buys writing fanfic, because I am re-read the twilight series over again to inspire to ...

Hey ash, I didn't feel any special as i alwasy do when i read your chapters. This one felt flat to me, like it was missing that spark. It was ...

Hey Ash, I still don't get it. Why do Nora and Sophia hate each other? Your view on birthing is totally different than mine, which it's good. I like your ...

Hey ash, This chapter....was a challegne to read, because it seems ( to me) it was going in ever driection and that's wasn't cool. But on a other note, We ...

Hey ash, This chapter was good, but not great. I do sugges that you take the advice aboe and make it into a great chapter. the whole Nora-Carmen-Sohpia thing bug ...

Hey Ash. Oh God. is Issac a vampire???? Tell me! :cries: tell me, i beg you! Nate! :squeals like a edward cullen fangirl: He is my fav. so far. You ...

Hey Ash. Nate is so sweet. too bad Sophia and Issac are going to end up together. Maybe if they don't end up together, maybe nate could be her mate. ...

Hey Ash. I am back. That was Sweet! I love it where Sophai bent the person's mind to follow her own. That was Awesome. Carmen. Don't tell me he still ...

Hey Ash, How is it going? I am here to review again. I must say, this chapter was very informational about you vampire. I love how you made your vampire ...

Hey ash. Since i am back, i will review your chapters now. All i can say is now. I never imagine Nate attacking anyone because he was so gentle hearted. ...